I tend to agree with ISO3200. Until I get back to france tomorrow I do not have a reliable monitor. I have a couple of hours before then to make use of this location 9my sisters place0 and the model, my niece. I may well get a reshoot in. Thanks for the feedback.
andy
Paul
22-Aug-2005 07:10
I like this one. It works for the challenge.
Rod
22-Aug-2005 02:29
It works for me grubby keys & all. Good shot Andy.
I agree, very nice, but "something" is needed. Maybe a little noise reduction, the keys look a little "dusty". And clone out the white stuff on the D sharp key (I think that's it... took 6 months of piano 45 years ago). - Tom
The composition (no pun intended) here is very very good. It's easy to look at this and see both images independently (if that makes sense). To me the more dominant one is the woman at the window which is odd as it is the foreground that is in focus. Despite my like of it overall, there seems an element of snappiness or punch that is missing in general that I can't quite put my finger on.
