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Scene 10

Without moving too much I tried to see what was behind me and a book shot to the floor. I must have somehow dislodged the book when I turned around and the edge of the spine caught me in the back. Feeling somewhat foolish I picked up the book and shoved it back on the shelf.
Hearing a rapping sound, like a bird pecking on glass, I glanced at the window. Rain made rivulets down it. I was glad I wouldn't have to walk home.
I carried the scrapbook to the head of the main staircase and sat down on the top step glancing down the long dim hall on the other side of the stairs. The boy's bedrooms were down that hall. I'd check that out later.
Placing my left shoulder against the wall I started to read more of the unbelievable story.
A while later I heard my sister-in-law rattling around in the sewing room but I didn't think anything of it. I was immersed in the article complete with several pictures of Franklin the man and Frances the woman.
Footsteps shuffled along the hall on the other side of the wall that I rested against and stopped right behind me. Assuming it was Ann I said, "This is an amazing story," without turning around.
When Ann didn't say anything I quick-glanced over my shoulder.
Shock riveted through me like a jolt of electricity!


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Sheila16-Oct-2009 09:19
What a good story.
(I keep getting interrupted and it is so exciting!)
waterfalls man15-Oct-2009 02:27
Beautiful V
poetry66613-Oct-2009 23:19
Oh my, Char. Love the photo and the chapter, waiting for more...V!
marko gregoric13-Oct-2009 12:10
Superb work. V.
Neal Nye13-Oct-2009 11:18
Scary as Blair Witch Project! That image looking down the stairs past the clippings is wonderful. This must have taken you months and months to prepare.
Guest 13-Oct-2009 09:49
Encore une fois, une ambiance morbide et une compo parfaitement composée! J'adore l'histoire aussi!Gros Bravo!V!
Ali Majdfar13-Oct-2009 09:21
Fantastic! ~V
NealyBob13-Oct-2009 07:56
Another great image and segment of the story Char~! V
January Grey13-Oct-2009 03:45
Another cliff-hanger! A very eerie photo...wonderful treatment, Char. V~
Jess. ( Lady.D.)13-Oct-2009 02:39
Terrific creativity not just the image but the story as well, great work Char...
Marcia Colelli13-Oct-2009 01:27
Another thrilling story. Well done V
laine13-Oct-2009 00:51
I'm pleased I read this in the morning :)) Love the photo too !!
Martha Albuquerque13-Oct-2009 00:34
The image is awesome.. you are a good story teller indeed Char!! love it all!! V
Cindi Smith13-Oct-2009 00:08
You are scaring the daylights out of me.....wanna know more!!!!!!!
Hank Vander Velde12-Oct-2009 23:37
Terrific image and continuation of the story Char.
waterfalls man12-Oct-2009 23:16
You are very Good Story Teller Char V+
Tom Munson12-Oct-2009 22:10
A great photographer and a flair for story telling. Well done, Char!
Jay Levin12-Oct-2009 22:10
I'll bet a skeleton was right behind you. Right, Char? :-) V
LeuAnna Taylor12-Oct-2009 20:07
I hope your story continues for the whole month - right up to Halloween. This is so much fun, Char. Really great job!
Guest 12-Oct-2009 17:59
Oh Char, you are such a good story teller and I have to laugh of all the comments, I see one jump in his bed another staying up all night, what are you doing to us.Love it
bill friedlander12-Oct-2009 17:08
I am getting into bed to hide under the covers.
Jim Coffman12-Oct-2009 15:52
Wow, I may stay up all night! Well done again,Char. V
Patricia Kay12-Oct-2009 15:03
Just had my dose of goosebumps after reading this episode Char....Great image and words!...BV
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