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Scene 11

A cold chill swept over me and every hair on my head stood on end. Nobody was there!
Throwing the scrapbook I charged; half falling; down the stairs, then ran through the living room and dining room to find Ann still in the kitchen where I’d left her.
Breathless I told her what had happened. She chuckled and said that I "looked like I'd seen a ghost."
I had a pretty good idea she didn't believe me. Shoot, I wasn't sure I believed it either. Yet, I knew a presence of some kind had walked up behind me. But what it was I didn't know and why it was I didn't know. All I know is that for a brief moment I seemed to have been caught up into some other time and place with an unknown and unseen presence that couldn’t have scared me more if it had been Norman Bate’s mother standing behind me with a butcher knife. Even unseen it was more real. But then when you stop to think about it Norman Bates'mother was never real to begin with.
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Martha Albuquerque17-Oct-2009 11:44
Superb dear Char!! V
Sheila16-Oct-2009 09:23
Brilliant effort.
Dennis Hoyne16-Oct-2009 04:19
So well done, very creative. You are great story teller. A thriller!
Fong Lam15-Oct-2009 16:05
I love spooky story....well done, Char !! V
Neal Nye15-Oct-2009 11:26
This image is a masterpiece. A perfect finish to this wonderfully illustrated story!
Ali Majdfar15-Oct-2009 09:01
Another creative work, ~V
NealyBob15-Oct-2009 06:15
Such a spooky and mysterious story Char! You did a great job illustrating it~! V
January Grey15-Oct-2009 05:46
A real thriller! A great scream image, Char! And the story gave me chills! Well done! V~
waterfalls man15-Oct-2009 02:27
Excellent Work V !!!
Frank Wilson15-Oct-2009 02:20
Keep up the great work . . .
Tom Munson15-Oct-2009 01:37
This has been fun, Char! Terrific image!
Marcia Colelli14-Oct-2009 23:54
You have such a wonderful imagination and creativeness. Nice work V
Jay Levin14-Oct-2009 21:51
Char, you should teach a course in art therapy, except you would scare the living daylights out of people! I love your creative work. Vote
Cindi Smith14-Oct-2009 21:23
So, then what happened???
Guest 14-Oct-2009 18:19
Another brilliant piece of work, Char. BV
bill friedlander14-Oct-2009 18:13
Thanks for the entertaining story and the wonderful pictures. I hope you do another one some day. V
Patricia Kay14-Oct-2009 17:45
Well done with your artwork and the story Char...I really enjoye the chills...BV
Guest 14-Oct-2009 17:25
agree with Jess, it's fabulous you're doing Char.
Jess. ( Lady.D.)14-Oct-2009 15:21
Your creativity knows no bounds Char....
Shayne14-Oct-2009 14:53
too cool!!!

BAV
Jim Coffman14-Oct-2009 14:41
Great work,Char! V
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