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23-JAN-2010 (c) Doug Cruden

24th - "Les Enfants Terrible"

Cheltenham, Glos.

(A coming of age novel with a twist from Jean Cocteau)

Another book first read many years ago but one I've revisited several times since - it's quite a disturbing read, but quite short in length (more of a novella really)...I'll say no more in case you want to read it! I've also always liked this book because of its title - its inspiration behind the name The Cocteau Twins (one of my very favourtest bands ever ever) is obvious

Needless to say, my two were a bit put out when I told them what the title was, and refused point-blank to cooperate, muttering something along the lines of "but WE'RE not terrible children..." at which I just burst out laughing, maybe too loudly. However, I managed to fire off this shot as only five minutes later, I caught Finn pounding on his sister...the shots of Naomi returning fire were all OoF (her fists do move quickly!) - this is the best of the violent, bloody but thankfully short-lived episode*

Once I'd administered first aid, I opened the file into ACR - I increased the Brightness and reduced Clarity a bit, then into CS3 for a B&W conversion (Default preset). I duplicated that B&W layer twice - I added a Curves adjustment layer to the top layer, altering the Red and Green channels to produce the lith effect. On the second duplicate layer, I added a strong Diffuse Glow and a bit of noise. I swapped the layer order so that the Diffuse Glow was on top, then reduced the Opacity of it to allow a bit of the lith effect layer to come through. Last but not least I flattened and resized for the web. I quite like this - the slow shutter speed has blurred the action but kept the background nice and sharp

Sunday 24th's sibling-rivalry entry to the Challenge; click here for other monochromed Pbasers in January

*I jest - this was a total set-up right from the start, although they did take the parentally-approved opportunity of a fight to exchange a few sneaky but devastating blows. And Finn & Naomi, if you ever read this, thank you for posing for me, and you're not 'enfants terrible' and nothing like Paul and Elizabeth, the children in the story :o))

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malcolm haslam31-Jan-2010 11:00
Chapeau, monsieur!
Carl and Racine Erland26-Jan-2010 03:31
Interesting idea...do I detect a smile...definately not terrible childern, hope they survive their father's creativity! ;-) - Racine
Walter Otto Koenig26-Jan-2010 03:25
The things we do for challenges, but the effect is so cool isn't it. Smashing action photo, beats all the rest today for sure knocking them right out. :)
carol j. phipps26-Jan-2010 00:24
Rough play, huh!?
Stewart Mitchell25-Jan-2010 20:50
I'm getting the strong suggestion from the image that they are turning into a pair of monkeys.....things are getting a bit hairy!!!
Sheila25-Jan-2010 11:33
I like the movement in this.
laine25-Jan-2010 09:18
hahaha...watch it, they may turn on the photographer :))
Mieke WA Minkjan25-Jan-2010 06:38
excellent this dark figure play
Ann...25-Jan-2010 02:34
Excellent - I like the sense of movement.
Cindi Smith25-Jan-2010 02:27
Ready, set, action! I hope no one really did get hurt.
Guest 25-Jan-2010 02:17
I like how you did this against the window so they are almost like silhouettes! You have very agreeable children who don't sound like enfants terrible at all :)
Phillip Normanton24-Jan-2010 17:47
I'm sorry but administering first-aid before processing the picture smacks of a lack of dedication to me ;o)
borisalex24-Jan-2010 17:39
You have brave kids, they do anything for you...stuntmen? Great shot, love the comp in front of the window!
Kevin Chester24-Jan-2010 17:10
Hey your kids are up for anything, what great models. Hope they didn't beat each other too bad. My Brother and I were never satisfied until one of us was bleeding
J. Scott Coile24-Jan-2010 16:40
Well played out and executed!
Guest 24-Jan-2010 14:49
Excellent well executed idea Doug!!!
Abescat Charles24-Jan-2010 14:39
Belle dynamique!
Ronald Bijtenhoorn24-Jan-2010 14:34
Well set-up; great result
Guest 24-Jan-2010 13:37
Terrible! Terrible! Now where is that strap? ... I know! I know! Today you just thank them for the show, and pay the hospital bill.
You are a great director, following the script, you will become famous!
Kathryn24-Jan-2010 12:18
You are so funny!
Great shot, glad you got your two to participate - tell them we appreciate it.
Stephanie24-Jan-2010 09:57
LOL at your description Doug! Glad to hear that there wasn't too much blood shed while compo composing this image! :)
Available Light Images24-Jan-2010 09:23
Ha, a powerful and evocative image of siblings doing what they do :-) pretty abstract too...
Barbara Heide24-Jan-2010 09:17
You made me laugh... great title... have a great Sunday!
Guest 24-Jan-2010 09:05
A great idea and I love the focus being behind the action
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