Annie -- you need a scale reference here that symbolizes more than that light pole does. Always try to create a juxtaposition of some kind when making a sunset shot, if you want more than just a pretty description. For example, last night, I shot a scene here in Phoenix that used a clump of trees in the foreground, echoing the shape of the overhead clouds:http://www.pbase.com/pnd1/image/66484915/ In Oregon, I waited for a tiny plane to enter my frame and play against a sky very much like your own:
http://www.pbase.com/pnd1/image/62019284