Asterisk comment: this should work really well - the colours and lighting and production are all very good - but for some reason it fails to really hit me and I think it's probably because there's a problem with the composition: the vase has a stronger, more minimalist shape than the flowers so naturally the eye wants to see it completed - and this leads the eye out of the frame without satisfying it. Also the vase is off-kilter, which introduces an uneasy tension into what is otherwise an harmonious shot. What do other people think? Tim
