His left eye looks focused to me (but then mine are ancient and not). It isn't necessarily about correctness anyway, but about what works. this is a warm, interesting portrait and it works for me. Eyes are funny organic blobs that sometimes don't look focused when they are. The chin and hair look focused, so the eyes can't be that far out.
Flick.
Thanks Flick... it's off my 1st ever film, and i'm not sure the focus is quite right - the eyes are out. also the light patch is above his head bothers me a bit. hey ho