Actually the boy says that this looks like I'm trying to escape from a giant snake. So maybe that would improve it..
blueriverdream
01-Sep-2009 16:51
it's a good photo, technically and compositional-y. But I really dislike it. It's a very stiff pose with no suggestions of comfort, pleasure, or grace. Good to see. To "fix" it I should have arched my head back/up or turned to the side or just closed my eyes. The legs are week (as always) they look halfway into a pose a little more in almost any direction or just tucked up closer to the body would have been better. I also don't like my makeup, too pink. Arms are ok hands are good, hair is fine, wardrobe could have done either w/out the bottom or with a different bottom.
