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Scene 5

I found Ann in the kitchen cooking.
After our initial greeting I volunteered to help with anything she needed done though housework was not high on my list of priorities.
My Sister-in-law smiled and said, “Believe it or not but I have everything done," and thanked me for volunteering my services.
Soon the conversation lagged as we didn't have a lot in common with a 15 year age gap so I was glad when Ann suggested that I go ahead and look around the rest of the house on my own. "You didn't see much of it when you were here after we moved in," she added giving me a knowing look. She picked up a spoon and started stirring the simmering red sauce in a kettle on the stove.
Ann was Italian and made the best Spaghetti I had ever had. She asked me to stay for supper saying that she would drive me home later because it would be dark.
I readily agreed not knowing that soon I would not be able to spend one minute longer than I absolutely had to in that house.
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waterfalls man10-Oct-2009 13:33
Superb work V!
Joanne Kamo10-Oct-2009 01:22
Awesome mood and setting really serves your story well, also like the b&w!
bill friedlander08-Oct-2009 18:42
Excellent light coming through the window to brighten up the kitchen. The exposure is spot on. V
Martha Albuquerque08-Oct-2009 14:39
You are so good at it :))~ more more please :)~~~~~~ V
Guest 08-Oct-2009 14:13
this is wonderful,cosy kitchen but I already saw in the thumbnail a staircase and if I should go and look around??
Cindi Smith08-Oct-2009 12:46
Oh, you are keeping me on the edge of my seat!!!!!
Ali Majdfar08-Oct-2009 12:34
Superb work, excellent. ~V
Neal Nye08-Oct-2009 11:13
Wonderful suspense. Your writing is as good as your photography, which is saying a lot!
laine08-Oct-2009 10:24
I can feel each moment...love the old sideboard too
NealyBob08-Oct-2009 09:35
Another great shot to better illustrate your story~! V
poetry66608-Oct-2009 09:32
Now this is an old kitchen and fits so well with your story Char. Even the drawings fit so nicely. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful work my friend.BV!!!!
January Grey08-Oct-2009 02:52
Terrific kitchen! Lends a lot to your story, Char. Wonderful mood & treatment. V~
Sheila08-Oct-2009 00:04
I started here and had to go back to read the ones before!
What a good story teller you are. The images are perfect.
Jay Levin07-Oct-2009 23:02
It appears that some knife wielding person drew on the walls, Char. Could he/she still be in the house?!! Quite a mysterious image. V
Marcia Colelli07-Oct-2009 22:39
wonderful story, very mysterious V
Hank Vander Velde07-Oct-2009 19:55
The mystery deepens. Great tale and most appropriate B&W image Char. Your choice of ragged border adds to the mystique.
Guest 07-Oct-2009 19:12
Très réussie cette ambiance lourde et inquiétante! Les détails sont sublimes! Mystérieux et angoissant! Bravo!V
Patricia Kay07-Oct-2009 18:48
Great shot Char adding to the spookiness of your tale....BV
LeuAnna Taylor07-Oct-2009 18:11
And the saga continues... This is wonderful stuff, Char! I like the details of the artwork on the walls mentioned previously.
an nguyen07-Oct-2009 15:51
Spooky mood. Like the film set. I like it a lot. V
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