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Scene 4

When I reached the house I scuffled slowly up the leaf-strewn driveway not really wanting to be there. I knew I'd have to feign interest where there wasn't any. Everything was not only old and antiquated in that house but the old man that had lived there had painted crude scenes from his childhood on the walls in every room except the sitting room. The paintings looked like pictures children bring home and tape to the refrigerator with square houses, barns and sheds, that leaned, and animals that also leaned. Throughout the scenes were the typical elementary trees with balloon foliage and a scattering of stick people. Though the artwork wasn't totally repulsive it looked as out of place as everything else in the house did. But then... maybe everything fit the house perfectly and the people were out of place. Whatever it was something wasn't right there and some part of me must have picked up on it the first and last time I was there.
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Chris Spracklen20-Oct-2009 17:40
Awesome B&W work, Char.
The detail is exceptional! (V)
Best regards, Chris
waterfalls man10-Oct-2009 13:23
Excellent V
waterfalls man10-Oct-2009 13:22
Excellent V
Martha Albuquerque08-Oct-2009 14:37
Yes.. S u p e r b ~~~ V~
poetry66608-Oct-2009 09:30
Excellent view of the house and surrounding trees Char. Very haunting..BV!
Hank Vander Velde07-Oct-2009 15:04
Beautifully composed image and great continuing story Char.
Neal Nye07-Oct-2009 11:11
You are doing a fabulous job with this. The text and the pictures match so perfectly.
Ali Majdfar07-Oct-2009 10:43
SUPERB! ~V
John07-Oct-2009 10:05
Excellent framed Char. V
January Grey07-Oct-2009 04:21
Great mood & story, Char. Love the treatment. V~
Tom Munson07-Oct-2009 03:17
Terrific image, Char! Can't wait till tommorrow.
Guy Dube07-Oct-2009 03:16
Impressive picture Char! V
Cindi Smith07-Oct-2009 02:32
Okay, the story continues and I want to know more!
Patricia Kay06-Oct-2009 20:36
Such a spooky scene Char....Great shot and continuation of the story.....BV
bill friedlander06-Oct-2009 20:29
Excellent B&W shot and good thing its daylight, I'd be scared to go anywhere near the place at night.
Guest 06-Oct-2009 19:47
cool Char, the trees have arms and ready too....., now I see them walking like in Lord of the rings,
Aida Villaronga06-Oct-2009 19:23
Excellent work with amazing dramatic mood . V
LeuAnna Taylor06-Oct-2009 19:02
OOOhhhhh! This is just getting better and better, Char! I can't wait for your next installment.
Jay Levin06-Oct-2009 18:57
The image and the text are more and more foreboding, Char. And yet you are alive today! :-)
Silvia Roitman06-Oct-2009 18:40
superb!
Buz Kiefer06-Oct-2009 18:04
Very nice image and spooky enough to go with your words Char. I must admit, I'm anxious to see and read more. Vote.
Dennis Hoyne06-Oct-2009 15:39
What a neat image! Very appropriate to the season, looking forward to more.
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