I coment: as your camera is garantie for sucses.
But I have calibrated display with spyder2 pro and can seded that you lost alot of collor deap; I known places where you crosing and rely you neded to going bit up with contrast.
That is my personal opinion.
Second -- your compositions in that one must go a bit on boy back side to give him place ( again my opinium )
I well take more time and crossing your gallery generlay are fantastic for presentations with projectors, but you asking me for opinion and my preposition is Did I have your photo on my wall at home...
Have nice day