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4/25/07 elips

"She put her glass on the small table beside the chair and rose."

I found this awkwardly constructed sentence amusing when I first read it in one of Martha Grimes' mystery novels. I have been saving it for the right challenge and this seems to be it. Perhaps a better way to write this sentence would have been something like: As she rose, she put her glass on the small table beside the chair. But then this image would have no excuse for being.


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jnconradie27-Apr-2007 16:57
Well done, Sharon. You are a master of the motion blur type shot. As creative as always! Regards jnconradie
elips27-Apr-2007 04:12
Thanks, CJ, Michael and Melbob! Yes, Michael, her books are very enjoyable! ~Sharon
Canon DSLR Challenge26-Apr-2007 13:43
Love the hand movement and the composition and I understand the last two words... cos if she sat on that seat she would most assuredly 'rise' ...lol!

I love the way you compose things that tell a story, well done. ~ Regards Melbob
Guest 25-Apr-2007 20:17
Awkward sentence aside, you have to love an author who titles novels after English pub names (I read them too) :-) Well thought out and composed, the whisp of a hand in motion makes it uniquely your own. -Michael
Canon DSLR Challenge25-Apr-2007 16:10
Well done Sharon - love the blurred hand! And that IS an awkward sentence! CJ