I think you have the begining of something but it looks to me that your subject is a little under-exposed. That makes me look at the background instead of the subject. Did you shoot RAW?
Beautiful light. I don't mind the wrinkles. I do mind the crop: I think the image would gain a lot if cropped about the ribcage, so the lower border of the body doesn't show.
Nugar
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12-Feb-2007 14:19
I think it would look better if the model was further from the background. If a viewer can tell it's a blanket, it's too close.
Debbi
Thank you for making comment. I smooth the wrinkles many times where I do not like them. These wrinkles I intend. They are like fire like hot red picture. They make same shapes like repeat on cheeks. I am sorry you do not like but I do on purpose. I pay attention to details always. I try. You do not like but I try. Maybe some other will like? Maybe you like next time.
Thanks for entering your three pics. I think I like this one the best....the warm skin tones and the red backdrop make for a pleasing photo and the curves of the body are just right. One nitpick would be the wrinkles on the backdrop......pay attention to the small details before taking the photo. It does make a difference.
