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Avril 2007 Claudia

.........just there


This is a wing that will never feel the wind again.
I found it,
just there,
when i came out of hospital today.
It pinched my heart to see on the sidewalk...a lifeless wing.
The memory of creature that could dance on the breeze.

The day is rainy.
I almost forgot to take my camera with me,
saying to myself, why should i take the camera for a visit at the hospital?
I did not know the answer, lived the question, put the camera in my bag.

Hurry here, test there, wait for results, doctor called on an emergency...
I am left to hang.
No results today...

I leave the hospital, tired of this solo tango.
Then, there is that wing on the sidewalk.
The wind is trying to pick it up...it wont move.

The delicate feathers of the inside
seem to be welcoming the soft carress of the wind
the other ones moved a little,
as if they remembered how it was
to have the wind
beneath them
instead of above.
As i left, sorrow in my heart
the wind picked up
and the wing
almost to say goodbye
waved for a last time.
The rain started to pour...



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Guest 20-Oct-2008 20:12
It has that X-factor, as do all your images! Beautiful!
Guest 28-Apr-2007 01:19
The Promise of a Friend

A wounded softness
Although crippled from flight
And stripped barren from cloud
Still carries a dream
Of being held, and cared for
By a tender palm
Willing to understand
And lift it again
Into an air of hope.


pr_rajan28-Apr-2007 00:26
...to live!....such a painful thing!....some times!
Guest 27-Apr-2007 23:57
Amazing treatment. Outstanding emotional imapct and then there are the words. To touch and be touched is the essance of being and of being truly human. You portray in your work and words an astounding ability to do both. V
Greg Harp27-Apr-2007 20:48
Beautiful work.
Adalberto Tiburzi27-Apr-2007 20:03
Photography and Chance are the same and one thing ;-)
Adal
Jean-Paul PLUME27-Apr-2007 19:49
Certes il y a une certaine tristesse laissée par cette aile abandonnée sur le sol et pourtant cette image est admirable: Les couleurs et le côté graphique apportent une réelle beauté à cette composition.
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