I guess there was some degree of restriction here on what you could achieve compositionally....were you on a wooden walkway or harbour wall? Tonally the camera has work ed well for you to retain such good foreground detail against the back light of the sky.....again a nice range of tones through black to white.....this is such an interesting subject it can't help but be interesting........however if the possibility were there I would attempt with an image like this to use the top or bottom left third to place the main action ......I think this one is also open to the creative use of the tilt to make it a little more dynamic...another image to work with 10-15 shots exploring the possinbilities.