I like the vanishing point just below the subject of interest. I would have shopped off half of the tracks, though. They are not the subject of this composition, just a pointer... I think the composition would be stronger that way --pegasus
No, this shot definately needs to be centralised. The rules of photography have to be broken at times and this is definately one of them.
The dot in the distance is indeed a train, I've had many dilemas about whether to clone it out or not, and in the end I've left it in as I've not adjusted the image in PS in any other way, so it's nice to leave it original and as shot.
I agree, it does look quite good in pano form with less sky. On the other hand, I like that the half-sky composition supports the symmetry present elsewhere, and thus notion of duality expressed in this photo. .. Lew
A great interpretation of the classic rail shot. One just hopes that the light at the end of the track isn't the train coming right at us! One thought on composition, using the rule of thirds if you cropped about half of the sky off you would turn this into a striking panorama and still not lose much of the sunset. ~Sharon