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Not a Red Rose
Day 284
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February 14, 2005

February 14, 2005
Not a Red Rose
Day 284

Valentine
by Carol Ann Duffy

Not a red rose or a satin heart.

I give you an onion.
It is a moon wrapped in brown paper.
It promises light
like the careful undressing of love.

Here.
It will blind you with tears
like a lover.
It will make your reflection
a wobbling photo of grief.

I am trying to be truthful.

Not a cute card or a kissogram.

I give you an onion.
Its fierce kiss will stay on your lips,
possessive and faithful
as we are,
for as long as we are.

Take it.
Its platinum loops shrink to a wedding-ring,
if you like.

Lethal.
Its scent will cling to your fingers,
cling to your knife.

~-~-~-~
The interesting thing about today's picture is that I was on the prowl for something with red in it,
that I was then going to desaturate and leave the red -- voila! for Valentine's Day.
I even had a poem in mind.
The onion shot was truly an accident; it wasn't till I had my pictures downloaded and was looking for the poem I wanted
that I came across this one entitled "Valentine" with the subject being an onion, and...well, the rest is history.
PS lighting effects added, and heavy saturation toward blue.

When you run into coincidences like that, you just have to go with the flow.
~-~-~-~

  


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gary becker19-Feb-2005 22:24
Great colors, DOF and composition. Top of the line onion skin.
The Suburban Hippie 15-Feb-2005 23:14
I think this is fantastic! I never thought an onion could look so attractive. Very creative. All of it.
Stu15-Feb-2005 17:45
Beautiful words, and, wow! what a picture. Very left-field and very, very good.
Karen Stuebing15-Feb-2005 11:01
Fantastic image! And I loved the verse too. Unique Valentine's Day contribution.
northstar3715-Feb-2005 10:46
lovely
Karen Leaf15-Feb-2005 02:37
OMG this is fabulous Carmen. Make a poster! Love this. Voting, and trying to vote again.
Cheryl Hawkins14-Feb-2005 19:34
::VOTE::
Nicely done. What a furious and passionate poem!
Gayle P. Clement14-Feb-2005 18:14
Wonderful poem and super composition!
Gary Winters14-Feb-2005 16:48
Whoa! Excellent work, Carmen -- the photo and the caption. Whoa!
jude14-Feb-2005 16:43
Perfect picture to go with the poem.. the stalk of celery even looks like a stem
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