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11-SEP-2006 Jeffrey Lewis Knapp

OPEN OPEN OPEN *
by Jeffrey Lewis Knapp

breakfast and lunch restaurant

Internet location in Mesa http://www.pbase.com/image/66707718

Kat's Place
SAME GOOD FOOD
480-854-4815

Breakfast And Lunch
6320 E Main Street
Mesa Arizona 85205

phone 480-854-4815
mobile 480-202-4018

6 AM till 2 PM seven days

best food in the west

Sony Mavica FD-100 ,Sony Optical 3x / Digital Zoom 6x
1/500s f/4.5 at 16.8mm iso100 full exif

other sizes: small medium original auto
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Helen Betts16-Sep-2006 14:36
Good find, Jeff. And some great advertising for Kat's Place! Helen
Franky2005 13-Sep-2006 07:03
Jeff, I really lilke these kind of shop window shots. The frame with the red wall works very well, especially with respect to the blue sky reflection. Maybe you can try to enhance this further as well as the saturation of the "Open" sign.
There are a few things where IMHO the composition requires some tweaking. I would first crop the image on the left side a bit, so that there is only one full brick is left. Also a correction of perspective I would try to set up the vertical lines of the window. The last but in my view most important is the crop of the "Same good ...". As there is some space left below "Restaurant" it seems that the other letters are just cropped by chance. My recoomondation is then to also crop the "Restaurant" further if you do not have the other letters available. All, just my 0.02€!