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Fishing-in-Amsterdam
03-MAY-2009

Fishing-in-Amsterdam


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Steve Passman 18-May-2009 00:13
This is engaging, well-seen, and unusual for an urban scene. It is important to include the urban buildings in the background, as you have done. As much as I want to look at the fisherman, what I see first is the big white triangle of water that dominates the scene, and what I see second is the white sky. This photo was well-worth a "grab"; you have done that well. After that, tonal range, and perhaps a lower viewpoint, could improve the image considerably.
Dan Greenberg 11-May-2009 14:11
Brilliant - totally a classic B&W image - great light, great story! ~Voted~
cliff rap 04-May-2009 14:47
Great work!
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