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red dress...

challenge... take a photo a day..that depicts emotion from a song, a poem or a proverb. Check out the OTHERS in the challenge HERE


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PK 07-Nov-2008 22:20
Saint-Girl, this picture caught my attention, not for the obvious reasons (curves in all the right places) but because it shows a huge amount of self-confidence...the artist IS THE art.

First things first...like the dress..pattern is cool...took me two looks to see it...you look great (validated through Pbase viewers globally), I like the pose....I like the "suggestion" of the pose...but it's hard to see...wonder if you did it to the side (with contrasting background) the viewer would see it easier (and draw more attention to the pull of the belt??).

Shoes hard to see...buckle or strap? I wonder if you background is white or off-white?? I wonder if you exposed photo longer you'd get more detail in blacks..gotta be careful as your left hand has a lot of light.... (black blacks and white whites..exposure..exposure)

I do enjoy your work...daring, bold..keep it up....
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