Am off for Oregon in a few minutes but I wanted to let you know how more effective this image is thanhttp://www.pbase.com/jswaters/image/61448504 The color is richer, the cables and hook device above the light add context, and the single light and half grille invites the imagination to fill in the rest of the details. To improve, take more care at the edges. The spring at right should not be half in and half out -- it needs to be fully included to lead the eye into the picture from the right, as a framing device. And the diagonal silver bar at bottom should have also been included, to create still another framing device.
