well james it is a very intersting composition the jury is still out on the blurryness of the image towards the bottom seems a tad distracting but on the other hand the blurryness seams to lend to the picture at the top. I guess to answer the question of weather the glasses works goes without saying but maybe you should try some selective or gausian blurr on all the letters of the poem except the ones you can see in the glasses. but all in all this image is very strong
