You have an eye for layered composition that pulls the viewer into an image. But to express an idea, an image must offer some degree of abstraction, incongruity, and refer to human values. All are missing here, so the result is a "level two" image -- you go beyond the disorganized snapshot here by making a very coherently designed image. However it fails to stimulate the imagination of the viewer and convey meaning beyond the
"picture post card" view.
