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10 MAY 08

Just thistle

But as macros go, according to the class I recently took, what's wrong with this is this:

There is too much "activity" or busy - ness in the background
It is a "static" representation . . . the stem is straight up the center, no "dynamics"
There are "hot spots" in the background that detract from the central focus (hot spots are bright areas that attract the eye)
Dark spots in the b/g aren't AS distracting as bright ones
There are superfluous items in focus that are NOT the main part of the picture
And not ALL of the spikes on the central focus item are in good clear focus but should be
everything that you want people to see should be in sharp-as-a-tack focus . . .

So this is not a complaint picture of what the instructor told me
This is one where I am trying to show ya'all what I learned


Other than all that, this is a good macro


see? I listen =)))

Canon EOS 40D
1/30s f/5.6 at 300.0mm iso400 full exif

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Karen Stuebing11-May-2008 16:50
Well, I like it and I also like the exposure and dof. :) Very spiky photo and cool capture of these "weeds."
Coleen Perilloux Landry11-May-2008 11:54
The thistle is an interesting thing to shoot. Sometimes we get so involved in what "they" say that we tend to forget our creative self.
Cindi Smith11-May-2008 05:16
Ain't just thistle. I think these plants are amazing. Yeah, they're weeds but they become quite the pretty flower. Yeah, a little much in the background but you can probably fix that. A little photoshop, maybe? Either way it is a good shot!
Robin Reid11-May-2008 04:02
I agree with the critique. This is a good picture; the problems fixed would make it great.
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