August 2: Stepping into the Darkness by Ray :)

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02-AUG-2004	IMG_8066

August 2: Stepping
into the Darkness

Woking, Surrey

Another hometown candid, but I’m not really sure about this. I like the woman entering the darkness of the bank, but is her companion a distraction? Please give your honest feedback!
I may have another go another day.

Photoshop:
Cropped and Resized
Desaturated in Grayscale Mode
Contrast +44
Framed using Pantone Cool Gray 11C

Canon EOS 300D Digital Rebel
1/320s f/5.6 at 75.0mm iso100 full exif

other sizes: small medium large original auto

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photo and copyright: Ray Pettit

Mattias Backström		26-Aug-2004 21:19
I think that only one of the women would be enough. But I'm not sure which one of them. After all, you're the right person to decide in the end. It's your gallery, and your photo.

Jill		02-Aug-2004 17:32
Like the play of light and shadow..tone is perfect IMHO. However, yes I would clone out the person to the left of her.

Adalberto Tiburzi		02-Aug-2004 17:19
A pity the sign "XY Bank" and the gates are missing. To represent a bank as a "heart of darkness" is politically very correct, in these dirty times.

Melanie		02-Aug-2004 17:15
Ditto Robin's comment!

Robin Reid		02-Aug-2004 17:12
I think it would be stronger if you blacked out her companion.