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Scene 7

An old dress form stood like a headless talisman in the shadows and a play of light on it made it appear to move.
The house had been inherited with everything in it as though the people that once lived there had simply walked away never to return.
The deceased owner had created many things in that room. She was known for her fur coats, but her fortè had been designing and sewing wedding dresses. She also gave lessons so there were many sewing machines scattered around the room.
When I stepped into the room I caught a glimpse of a sudden streak out of the corner of my eye and heard what sounded like every marble in my head tumbling to the floor. I froze ready for fight or flight.
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Dennis Hoyne11-Oct-2009 03:04
This is so creative and very well done, perfect for the season!
waterfalls man10-Oct-2009 13:35
Fantastic story V
poetry66610-Oct-2009 11:59
This is a real nail biting scene and chapter Char. Very well described and leaving the reader on the end of their seat and wanting to know more. Great scene of the sewing machines and streming sunlight.BV!!!
Neal Nye10-Oct-2009 11:29
A fantastic image with those sun's rays. This room looks like a perfect place for the spirits to dwell!
Sheila10-Oct-2009 09:39
Arrrg! Don't stop there! I'm biting my nails.
Your creative images are fabulous too.
Ali Majdfar10-Oct-2009 08:26
Fantastic story embeded with a creative work, ~V
NealyBob10-Oct-2009 06:29
Very creative work Char! Love the treatment! It really adds to the story~! V
January Grey10-Oct-2009 05:08
Another spooky story & image, Char. Wonderful composition & treatment. V~ love it!
Guest 10-Oct-2009 04:38
Fantastic work Char. Excellent. V
Tom Munson10-Oct-2009 02:40
Cool shot and wonderful story, Char! Ye have a flair for this!
Cindi Smith10-Oct-2009 02:25
You are spooking me out!!!!!!
Marcia Colelli10-Oct-2009 02:16
wonderful story, great effect with the sunbeam streaming in. Nice work V
Hank Vander Velde10-Oct-2009 00:24
Great image to compliment this most intriguing suspenseful story Char.
Bartosz Kotulski09-Oct-2009 22:33
fantastic work. little bit scary:0
Bartosz
Jim Coffman09-Oct-2009 21:46
What a great treatment,Char! BV
Patricia Kay09-Oct-2009 20:20
Fabulous image Char...getting more spooky by the day! BV
laine09-Oct-2009 19:58
Goosebumps appearing !!!!
bill friedlander09-Oct-2009 18:28
I am biting my fingernails.
LeuAnna Taylor09-Oct-2009 17:54
Maybe it's a deceased bride that's returned for a fitting of her wedding dress...
Guest 09-Oct-2009 17:44
wow this is super mysterious, go on, can't wait what's coming next, I'll stay.
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